So guys I would love it if you would read this draft of a fanfiction novel I am writing! It's a Tsutoko (Tsuyu Tsui and Fumikage Tokoyami) please comment thoughts critiques and opinions!

Tokoyami was staring. He couldn't tell you why, and even if he could he would deny it, but he was staring at fellow classmate Tsuyu Tsui. He thought she was, dare he say it, beautiful. Like a creature of the night, dark and full of glorious mystery. Suddenly a loud bang startled him out of his thoughts. He turned, there standing right next to him was a very upset Katsuki Bakugo. The blonde had attempted to sneak up quietly to Eijiro Kirishima and had knocked over Ochaco Uraraka's desk. "Shit!" was his very loud exclamation. Tokoyami just stared unamused and went back to trying to listen to a very pissed off Aizawa-Sensei.

At the end of the lesson the class filed out to the dorms. Tenya Lida was shouting some incoherent nonsense about how lines should be perfectly straight or some such idiocy. Tsuyu Tsui was joking with Mina Ashido and Uraraka about guys when she felt cold stare. She turned to see Tokoyami quickly turn away. Was that a blush on his face? Now Tsuyu was confused. Tokoyami didn't have feelings right? the only thing he felt was like eternal darkness or something, right?

"Hey Tsuyu you  in there?" Ashido asked.

"Oh yeah just thinking ribbit." The amphibious girl replied.

"well are you excited for Momo's movie night in the common area?"

Again this is just a draft so please tell me what is wrong with it!